Kite Making by Mercedes
Do you know how to make a kite? Let me tell you. First, you make a list of supplies. Next you get some scissors, dowels, glue, paper, and string. After that you can cut a piece of paper in a diamond shape. Then glue a string around the edge of a kite and put the dowels on. At last you fly the kite.
posted by Everett Eagles at
12:26 PM
3 Comments:
You did a great job, Mercedes! You really understand how important the order of the project is and you explained it with order words, like first, next and last.
Keep writing.
By
Rita Ehly, at 1:40 PM
I like how you listed all the steps in order. You explained the steps using order words too! Sometimes, my 4th graders will forget how important that is. But you remembered!
Mrs. Johnson
4th Grade Teacher
By
Room 210 Writers, at 9:51 AM
Great job Mercedes your story was the
best i ever heard.I am very happy for
you.You must worked a lot for doing that kite.I will try to do the kite you made too.So keep writing.
annelise
By
Jules, at 9:04 AM
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