How to make a Kite by Christian
Do you know how to make a kite? Let me tell you. First you get a big piece of paper and then make the kite shaped like a dimond. Next you get a string and glue it to the kite. After that you put the dowels on the kite. Finally you have a Kite!
6 Comments:
Great way to grab attention with your first sentence. I like your writing. You have great "Voice".
By Rita Ehly, at 1:33 PM
Christian,
You did a great job describing this kite. It sounds like all of the 2nd graders had a great time making kites!
Mrs. Fuller
By Lynn, at 3:00 PM
What color is your favorite for a kite. Diamond shapes are nice. Have you ever seen a box shaped kite? Nice writing, keep up the good work!
Mrs. Johnson
4th Grade Teacher
By Room 210 Writers, at 9:39 AM
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By Jules, at 7:26 AM
I think you have a cool kite and I feel like I could make one.
Isaiah
By Jules, at 7:36 AM
It sounds like you did a great job making your kite!
Mrs. Zetterman
By Kim, at 5:26 PM
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