Everett Eagles

Sunday, January 07, 2007

The Lost Doll by Jaqueline


The Lost Doll by Jaqueline 11/06
Yesterday I went to my fiends houws. We playd
barbeys but we codint find a doll. But my
friends bruther had the doll. He stold the doll.
He didnint want to giv it to me. So my friend
told her mom. He gave it to us. We playd barbeys.
We had fun.

posted by Everett Eagles at 1:41 PM

4 Comments:

  • Dear Jaqueline, I am glad you got your doll back. Do you think her brother took it because he wanted to play barbies with you?

    Sometimes brother's and sister's just tease too much.

    Mrs. Taylor

    By Blogger lindajt9, at 1:48 PM  

  • Jaqueline,
    I only have sisters,they liked to tease me too. I am glad you got your doll back!
    Mrs. Zetterman

    By Blogger Kim, at 6:48 PM  

  • Jaqueline,

    I'm so glad that your friend's brother gave the Barbie back to you. Brothers can be kind of mean sometimes, just ask Marin. Jeremiah does things like that to her sometimes!

    Mrs. Fuller

    By Blogger Lynn, at 6:44 PM  

  • Jaqueline,
    Your story was awesome! You had a good beginning, middle, and end. You worked hard on this story. I'm sorry that he stole your doll. My brother use to do stuff like that to me. I'm glad you got it back too. Keep up the great work...you super writer!
    Mrs. Spickelmier

    By Blogger Everett Eagles, at 9:22 PM  

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