The Scare Has by Zach 11/06 I wen to the scare has. It wuz big with plaztic bats. There wus skelntins at the has. There wus sampirs. There was wihcs tu.
Your story really scared me! I DO NOT like scary houses! Don't bring any plastic bats around me either - I will scream and everyone in the school will wonder what is going on!
Zach, I don't like really scary houses anymore. I did when I was in high school. I like the one at Roca Farm that has glow-in-the-dark cartoon characters. Great writing. Keep up the good work. Mrs. Spickelmier
4 Comments:
Dear Zach,
One time, I went to a Scary House, too. There were some plastic bats and flashing lights and it was very dark. I didn't like it very much.
You must like things like that.
Mrs. Taylor
By lindajt9, at 1:50 PM
I liked to go to scary houses when I was a teenager. Now they scare me too much. I make Colton and Shea take their dad in, instead of me!
Mrs. Zetterman
By Kim, at 6:51 PM
Zach,
Your story really scared me! I DO NOT like scary houses! Don't bring any plastic bats around me either - I will scream and everyone in the school will wonder what is going on!
Mrs. Fuller
By Lynn, at 6:42 PM
Zach,
I don't like really scary houses anymore. I did when I was in high school. I like the one at Roca Farm that has glow-in-the-dark cartoon characters. Great writing. Keep up the good work.
Mrs. Spickelmier
By Everett Eagles, at 9:25 PM
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