The Monkey and the Tiger by Brandon
The Monkey And The Tiger by Brandon 11/06
I sol a big monkey in the jungle
looking fer the tigr.
The tigr is in the jungle too.
The tigr was runig and monkeu
keld the tigr. Mommy and Dad tigr
were sad.
posted by Everett Eagles at
1:26 PM
4 Comments:
Dear Brandon, I liked your story. I feel bad for the mom and dad tiger.
Mrs. Taylor
By
lindajt9, at 1:53 PM
Brandon,
Your story made me feel a little sad. But I understand that not animals can live together in the jungle.
Mrs. Zetterman
By
Kim, at 6:59 PM
Brandon,
Your story about the monkey and the tiger made me so sad. I wish that didn't have to happen. I was surprised that the monkey killed the tiger though, it seems like the tiger could easily have killed the monkey instead. Thanks for sharing your story!
Mrs. Fuller
By
Lynn, at 6:37 PM
Brandon,
Oh, you wrote a sad story...you know that these make me sad too. I hope that the next time you will write a happy story. You did a great job. Keep up the good work.
Mrs. Spickelmier
By
Everett Eagles, at 9:28 PM
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