My football Dream by Mr. Fisher
Football is my favorite gema and someday I want to be a football player.
The best this is when I tackle people. Sometimes I will help them up because I am nice. Sometimes I will not help them up because I am not so nice!
In football here is what you have to do. I will have to read or you cannot play because you will not know what you are doing. You have to know what the plays say or you can't play or you won't get the ball.
Here are the hero's of the story. Ty Law. I like him because he is a good tackler on the team. Here is another one. Troy Brown. He is a wide receiver and her can catch, too. Her is one more, Michael Vick. He knows how to throw the ball. He is also the best Quarter Back!
The best this is when I tackle people. Sometimes I will help them up because I am nice. Sometimes I will not help them up because I am not so nice!
In football here is what you have to do. I will have to read or you cannot play because you will not know what you are doing. You have to know what the plays say or you can't play or you won't get the ball.
Here are the hero's of the story. Ty Law. I like him because he is a good tackler on the team. Here is another one. Troy Brown. He is a wide receiver and her can catch, too. Her is one more, Michael Vick. He knows how to throw the ball. He is also the best Quarter Back!
posted by Everett Eagles at
12:36 PM
5 Comments:
Dedric,
Great job on your story! It's pretty cool to be published on the internet. I loved your honesty. I hope that your dreams come true for you. And if they don't I hope you don't stop dreaming & working to achieve those dreams. Your a great guy. I'm proud of you.
Mrs. Spickelmier :0)
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Jules, at 8:47 PM
TO Mis.V Thanks for the comments I do wish it comes true.I give you good luck back
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lindajt9, at 9:48 AM
Dedric,
I really hope that I will get to watch you playing college and even pro football someday! I'm not one for watching sports, unless I have a good reason - like watching you!
Here's the question though, if you do go pro, will you help your poor old teachers out with a retirement fund?
Keep up the great writing!
Mrs. Fuller
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Lynn, at 1:37 PM
Dedric,
Love your story about football. My favorite player this year is Nate Swift on the Huskers! Even as a freshman he gave his all every game and it paid off throughout the season. You seem like a player who will give it his all, not only in the game but in school too! Keep up the great work!
Mrs. Zetterman
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Kim, at 2:13 PM
Dedric i realy like your story about football. Michle Vick is the best QB.
Sincerly,Mustik
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Everett Eagles, at 9:38 AM
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